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Serendipity November 12, 2009

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Lonely and dark no more,
The woods are the place to be
Miles to go I definitely have
But the warmth of her hand I now can feel

The feel, the touch, the breath, the voice..
Its all so magical and utopian.
The angelic presence of the lassie
Makes me forget all my fear and ambition.

She gives me the look
And It fills me with ardency
In her chromatic and beautiful eyes I dwell
And lose myself in fantasy.

The conjuncture was never intentional
Nor was the story conventional
For some, it takes ages to happen
For me, that one moment…
That one moment had all of what I wanted to see in the depths of her gaze.

The way it kills you and yet you want more of it..
The way you’r together always and yet cant subsist for a minute without
The way you tried to escape and yet the arrow buzzed and bit.
Is this what they call love? Or rather serendipity?

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1. pspratyush - November 12, 2009

brilliant, very well written man… this poem puts a lot in words, i am touched 🙂

2. Pankaj Saini - November 12, 2009

No serendipity dude… it’s LOVE 😛 .. haha… 😀 sth really happening with you.. or just imagination… if it’s the latter.. and I’ve got to say.. ‘WoW’ … and really well composed… way to go 🙂

3. Vipul - November 12, 2009

good one 🙂
must say what a difference a “movie” can make 😛

4. Maruti Borker - November 12, 2009

Naaaicee poem dood . nice comment vipul bhai 😛

5. Kavitha - November 12, 2009

Very well written I must say 🙂

6. Vivek - November 12, 2009

At a loss!!

7. Ravi - November 12, 2009

cool man….. someone’s writing frm……

8. Himank - November 12, 2009

Not one of ur better ones man.. 😐 You know my view 🙂

9. Naveen - November 12, 2009

LIKE 🙂

10. Sambhav - November 12, 2009

Pankaj ++

11. shrikant - November 12, 2009

i liked it and looks like someone is in l.. 😛

12. prashasti - November 12, 2009

whats up madoo?
romantic poetry kahan se picture mein aayi …I thought you were studying managament courses ? :P…nice poem though..

13. Priyanshu - November 12, 2009

Well well well… 😀

14. Angad - November 12, 2009

Excellent !!!

15. Namrata - November 12, 2009

Sesciee poem. Loved the last para especially!

16. sushma - November 13, 2009

Hey very well written…last para was awesomely phrased 🙂

17. Chand - November 13, 2009

Nice…

18. Kshitij - November 13, 2009

kshitij likes this (facebook style) 😉

19. anurag mohota - November 13, 2009

i can see exactly where that is coming from…..
its the bottom of the heart to be very superficial….:)

20. mythalez - November 13, 2009

ahem ahem .. u claim some movie to be fav .. and now this … wat next eh? 😛

21. srirang - November 13, 2009

woooaaaawww!!! nice poem man.. direct ‘dil se’. good! 🙂

22. sufal - November 13, 2009

Very well written!!

23. Kunal - November 13, 2009

beautifully written 🙂

24. Sandeep - November 13, 2009

nothing more to be said…. 🙂 …

25. Vikas - November 14, 2009

simply AWESOME dude… Keep it coming… 🙂

26. Shruti - November 14, 2009

gud work dude…this can only happen when words come directly from ur heart…. 🙂

27. Ashita - November 14, 2009

beautiful… except for a lil mistake which Swati had pointed out.. 🙂

28. hellboy - November 15, 2009

naahhhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiceeeeeeeeeee … u must really be in love to write this !! 🙂 .. else, plagarism !!! 😛 … so, shud we be looking at the “pics” which khare pointed out sometime back on FB ?? 😀 ..

29. touseef - November 15, 2009

awesome post dude… sahi shayari horahi hai… kya maamla hai

30. Rahul - December 10, 2009

Who cares

31. Fiza - April 16, 2010

hey karan its beautifully written man and so very romantic as well…seems like love for sure (a little late for a response… i knw)

32. Neha Kapoor - June 2, 2010

Loved it!


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