Sorry! May 21, 2007
Posted by Karan in Poetry.trackback
Life ushered me into a new phase,
One that makes or breaks.
I was ready for it
Or was I?
I thought I had it all.
I imagined that it was perfect.
But alas..
It was not to be.
Where had I gone wrong?
It all seemed very beautiful.
We shared the most enticing moments.
The world was the best place to be in,
It was all too perfect.
Things between us came to a pass.
Was I to blame, or him?
It was not easy to come in grips with the loss.
Looking back, my face sparkles with tears.
How do I tell him that I cared,
Or her that I really loved from the bottom of my heart
My heart ached when we fought,
But ready to compromise, I was not.
Not once, not twice, but many an uncountable time,
I had let myself down.
I wish those times, those angels,
Come flying back into my life.
What an irony!
I was in the company of people,
But still felt empty at heart.
In spite of sharing heart beats
I was walking down the lonely road…
hey thats a indeed beautiful poem
very well written!!! 
hey nice poem …………. frm whr have u copied it
…….(r u alrite maroo)
the poem was very good…..but I don’t think it reflects you…..and if it does ,then i am amazed
Lovely!
Gosh !!
you .???
kya baat hai madoooooo ….. kavi ban gaya …. aur senti bhi mar raha hai . vaise ye kahan se maari ???
Madu sabh thik thak … kya emotional poem likha hai baap … sob sob!!
walking down the lonely road !! nice one .
now look whos writing ‘I am frustrated’ poems
Hey !! Chill maar dude … mast poem man … I am expectin more poems frm u … ( thode kam senti phuleeez )
great poem dude … but i agree with pagare it doesnt reflects you at all
achchhi poem hai. Keep up the good work. It’s a good habit, helps you knock off some load when you’re stresssed up. Be;eive me, I know that!
What the hell!!! what happened to you…………..????? ………. poetry that too this kind of confession ………… well it’s no doubt an expressive piece of work…….. fairly structured………….. but i can’t he;p keep thinking “are you really okay?”
Good work yaar !!
!!
Didn’t know you write poems too maroo !!
keep up the good work !!
waise i am expecting a romantic one next !!
Nice work dude. Never expected this from you
hey, that’s a nice one… it expresses wat u felt quite well i think… keep writing more of such pieces!
Wow!!Just one word to say -FANTASTIC!!!Poems are such a fine way of expressing your emotions!!
The last 5 lines are fantabulous!!
Do I need to appreciate this one ?? ….. just awsome !!
cathartic??
proslepsis for sure….
or maybe bits of synesthesia [:)]
Only Mr. Sudhakar Marathe can do justice to the review of the poem!!
Nonetheless a very good effort
Thanks so much everyone.
The appreciation means a lot, especially tht I forayed into poetry fter so many years..
Few points
As Pagare n Shrikant pointed out, this poem does noh totally reflect me, but its that some part of me which has inspired me 2 write this.
Nd dear mythalez, i was kinda xpectin this comment frm ya
Once again, the appreciation means a lot 2 me!
nice poem dude…give us more insight into wat u really meant in the poem?? and whom were u intending??
Awesome yaar……..
hey…dear .. the road isn’t really empty..it may be filled with silent people… who really cares for u…what you have to really try is to approach them……and then you will not alone..
Dude whum is dis poem written for
HIM?OR HER??
pls chec
some paras in goes like
How do I tell “him” that I cared,
Or “her” that I really loved from the bottom of my heart
well anyway still a gud one!
keep it up!
@Priyanka.
well this is a generalized poem.. nt jus a particular person!
really touching and well-knitted ……
aise senti thoughts aate kahan se hai????
Very Touching…..was in tears….good job karan…